Talk:Gujjar (South Asian tribe)
Latest comment: 10 years ago by PaintedCarpet in topic Copyedit review
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This article is very confusing. It starts out by talking about the tribe in general, but ends up being a list of the notable people who are members of that tribe. Since the article seems to be going in different directions, it's not ready for a copyedit at this time.
As for ways to improve the article, I'd suggest creating a list of notable people that was purely a list, split the info on each specific person into their own page if they are notable, and use this page to talk just about the tribe. PaintedCarpet (talk) 15:59, 13 January 2014 (UTC)