Talk:Google Me (Kim Zolciak song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by MarioSoulTruthFan in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:21, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
Infobox edit
- Fine
Lead edit
- critics -> music critics and link to music journalism
- changed
Done
Background and release edit
- "It was then scheduled to be released to iTunes for digital download and streaming on October 5, 2010" - sounds like it was canceled, needs to be re-written
- changed
Done
Music and lyrics edit
- I see no point in the image given here as its footer it is the same as the first sentence in this section.
- changed, hope this is now okay?
- Because of copyvio's possible violations, let's trim Zolciak quote or rephrase it. See Earwig's Copyvio Detector.
- changed
Done
Critical reception edit
- music critics ->link to music journalism
- changed
- "and the song as a masterpiece." -> "and to the song as a masterpiece."
- changed
Done
Track listing edit
- Remove, per one listing of the song is non-essential.
- removed
Done
Release history edit
- The second date has the same references twice. Reference 13 and on the end of Note B, I would remove the former, since Note B already has those sources.
- changed
Done
Notes edit
- Fine
References edit
- Vulture needs "url-access=limited"
- changed
- A source check has been conducted on references 1, 3, 5, 8, 9, 11, 14, 15 and 18
Done
Overall edit
- On hold for seven days. Please let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:08, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hello MarioSoulTruthFan, I've addressed all the above points ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 12:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- I've tried to fix that >> Lil-unique1 (talk) — 18:39, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Good job! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:33, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- I've tried to fix that >> Lil-unique1 (talk) — 18:39, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)
- Hello MarioSoulTruthFan, I've addressed all the above points ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 12:58, 4 July 2022 (UTC)