Talk:Good Girl Gone Bad: Reloaded/GA1
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 00:01, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
I will review this article since I didn't get to comment on Tomica's last FAC . So I'm making it up :D. Best, jonatalk to me 00:01, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
- Found 1 disambig link
- Found 1 deadlink
- Too many sentences has the word "song" and is seen as repetitive at times (ex: He felt that "Disturbia" would be better suited for a female singer and gave the song to Rihanna. Kennedy produced the song, while Makeba Riddick produced Rihanna's vocals. The song was recorded by Andrew Vastola at Rocky Mountain Recorders in Denver, Colorado.)
- Overlinking found (Maroon 5, lead single, MTV News, Best Dance Recording, 2009 Grammy Awards)
- Missing a word "was released as second single from the album on April 28, 2008"
- Missing a word "suggested that she wanted to release "Disturbia" as next single"
- Missing a word "She performed "Take a Bow" for first time on the"
- Missing a word "Rihanna performed "Disturbia" for first time"
- Missing a word "it was predicted that would sell"
- Missing a word and needs rewording "In its second week reached number nine and it the third week"
- "As of November 2012, both Good Girl Gone Bad and Reloaded have sold 2,800,000 copies in the US alone." - any way of updating this figure?
- "Good Girl Gone Bad re-entered the UK Singles Chart" - is this an error?
I will continue the review tomorrow with a source check and any referencing issues. Best, jonatalk to me 02:28, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
- References
- Inconsistency with linking (compare FN#8 and 9 and FN#19, FN#21, FN#58, FN#60, #61, #62)
- FN#43 is the straight line an error?
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- Never mind I don't see it anymore. jonatalk to me 23:42, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
- Why is YouTube sourced to the claim "and presents Rihanna as a female protagonist who leaves her boyfriend because of his infidelity."? (FN#44)
- Why is YouTube sourced to the claim "and portrays Rihanna in various locations such as in a prison cell and gas chamber."? (FN#59)
- You already linked Time Inc. for FN#29, no need to link it (FN#63)
- Done. 21:01, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
- FN#70 is inconsistent to FN#36 and FN#38 (linking)
- Inconsistency with dates (compare FN#77 and FN#78 with FN#79)
- FN#86 is MTV News not MTV
These are my reference notes, nothing major. Best, jonatalk to me 15:14, 14 May 2013 (UTC)