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This is excellent!! Great topic. Great outline. I hope you'll expand it. Maybe include its sponsors. If there's been any study of the effect that comes from Golden Week, that would be helpful. Overall, excellent start.Mcassell04 (talk) 17:50, 11 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Great start on the organization and information. I would suggest adding some references throughout the article. See if you could talk about other instances similar to "Souls to the Polls" or anything similar to Golden Week in other states Lrigby1 (talk) 03:29, 15 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

I think the format is excellent and its a great topic. I would include some of the opposition to golden week and how govenor Kasich and Jon Husted fought to end golden week in ohio. Id include the support golden week got from community organizations and how golden week was against the republican agenda of stricter voting laws. At the time they used voter fraud excuses to pass stricter voter laws and push towards less voter particpation. but some of this might be bias! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ahayes16 (talkcontribs) 04:16, 15 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

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First off, great article! It is very well put together and organized. My advice is as follows for each section:

History: Add any data as for the need/ request for this policy by interest groups, local and state initiatives etc. I would expand on the logistical issues and possibly create a "before and after" chart as to highlight the advantages of this and how they may have outweighed the disadvantages. Is there any past legislation attempts for this in the past? If so why did it fail? What obstacles were there then that aren't here now? Is the political atmosphere different? What about the social need for it? Logistical need? Maybe a link to transportation and technological developments have had an effect lowered the difficulties or lack there of.

Usage: What other usages could this provide? What demographic has most benefitted from this? Input something for deployed soldiers, U.S. citizens on international vacation etc. what about students on international internships? Is there anything different for them or no? Were there any other social or religious groups that aided in this campaign? If so what was there engagement with it? Possibly add a statistical illustration

Contention & Elimination: I would expand on the safeguards for minorities and maybe relate it to inequality in some way with links. Who specifically has said such policy has had detrimental to them state and voting outcomes? Look to get as much as you can for this section as it seems to be the " meat and potatoes" of this article. How was senate bill 238 introduced? Who endorsed it? What demographic pushed for this?..etc Anything on the actual statistics on cost-benefit analysis done? If so, was it a third party vendor doing so or political party doing it? What was the determination of the NAACPvs.Husted case?

Possible section/ subsection additions: Cause, current/ pending legislation on golden week, social implications, technological developments to bring it back . — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ccofojohn20 (talkcontribs) 22:40, 13 November 2015 (UTC)Reply