Talk:Goito-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 20 June 2016 (UTC)

• No DABs, external link good.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Capitalize torpedo cruiser in the infobox
  • Done
• Suggest that you use feet and inches rather than decimal feet.
  • Fixed
• Suggest that you move the note to the Header caption in the infobox, like this: (Goito) with the rest of the note the same.
  • Done
• Suggest that you spell out metric tons for all measurements as the 't' looks odd when contrasted to the spelled out other measurements.
  • Done
• typo: THey had a crew
  • Good catch
• three steam engines each driving Comma after engines
  • Done
• In 1894, Goito had her center engine and screw removed and her original boilers replaced with coal-fired models The original boilers were also coal-fired.
  • Good catch, should've been oil-fired
• Link fore-and-aft rig, reserve
  • Done
• Hyphenate medium caliber and clarify that cal. is the abbreviation for caliber
  • Done
• Have you checked the info in the last two volumes of Warship on actions in the Adriatic during WW2 for any further activities?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:47, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
  • I assume you mean WWI, but no, I don't have them. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 16:03, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
    • Then you should run out and get them pronto! What matters more, your kids' college educations or Wiki?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:42, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
      • They're on my Amazon wishlist... ;) Parsecboy (talk) 16:44, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
        • And the effective range of an excuse is ...?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:53, 20 June 2016 (UTC)