Talk:Get Sexy/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Till I Go Home in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: 1111tomica (talk · contribs) I will review the article:) 20:17, 17 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

No dead links or disambiguation pages. That's good ! — Tomica1111Question Existing? 22
10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Lead
  • "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from the group's seventh studio album, ---> "Get Sexy" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, taken from their seventh studio album... (because there is repeating of the word group in the sentence)— Tomica1111Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • It was written by Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob ManzoliIt and produced by The Smeezingtons. ---> It was written by Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass, Rob Manzolilt, Phillip Lawrence, Ari Levine, Bruno Mars and produced by the latter three under their stage name The Smeezingtons.— Tomica1111Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Not done. Britain uses dd/mm/yy format. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • Emil Nava and features the group's members in a house of mirrors, a bird cage and on a couch ... on a couch? I mean I don't find it necessary here. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Background and composition (merge the both sections since the composition one is too small to standing like that)
  •   Not done.
  • I have expanded the composition section, hopefully it is long enough now. Till I Go Home (talk) 01:04, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • "Get Sexy", which was selected as the album's lead single, was written by The Smeezingtons, Fred Fairbrass, Richard Fairbrass and Rob Manzoli.[3] It was produced by The Smeezingtons ... use the sentence from the lead.— Tomica1111Question Existing? 22:10, 19 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Not done. Britain uses dd//mm//yy. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:23, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
  Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 00:29, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Composition
Critical reception
Commercial performance
  • Looks good
Music video
References

Mmm they are pretty bad condition. Here are the tasks: — Tomica1111Question Existing? 21:48, 22 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • 1. publisher=Hachette Filipacchi Médias
  • 2. The same as 1
  • 4. Same as 1 and 2
  • 5. Same as 1, 2 and 4
  • 6. Same us 1, 2, 4 and 5
  • 7 Un-italicize iTunes. publisher= Apple
  • 8 Un-italicize Discogs
  • 9. work=Daily Mail|publisher=Associated Newspapers Ltd
  • 10. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5 and 6
  • 11. You have the task in the composition review
  • 12. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 and 10
  • 13. work=Guardian|publisher=Guardian Media Group
  • 14. Same as 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 10 and 12
  • 15. Un-italicize Popjustice
  • 18. Same as the previous
  • 19. publisher=UK Singles Chart. The Official Charts Company
  • 20. Same as 19
  • 21. Same as 19 and 20
  • 22. publisher= MTV UK. Viacom
  • 28. Same as 9
  • 29. Same as before
  • 30. Link Capital FM
  • 31. Un-italicize Sugababes.de
  • 33. Needs accessdate
  • 34-43. All need accessdate
Will post more comments tomorrow. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 00:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
All in all
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
  • I addressed all the issues above except the music video screenshot, where I changed the caption. Is it relevant now? Till I Go Home (talk) 01:38, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Why is Digital Spy in the name of the reference. Both Digital Spy and Hachette Filipachi Media should be in the publisher. For the image is good now. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 08:54, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Because that's the title of the page. Till I Go Home 08:56, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
    Nevermind. You remove it from there and adding it in the publisher. After you finish formatting the references well. I will pass the article. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 08:57, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
    So will it be "|publisher=Digital Spy. Hachette Filipachi Media" ? Till I Go Home (talk) 08:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
    Yes.:) The same with the others. — Tomica1111Question Existing? 09:01, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
    I put in Digital spy in the publisher now. :) Till I Go Home (talk) 09:05, 23 January 2012 (UTC)Reply