Talk:French submarine Mariotte/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:00, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Anything you could add to clarify what the drop collars are for non-experts? I don't think we have a link, unfortunately.

   I wish that I did, nothing beyond the name in any of my sources.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   I'd assume the patrols off Provence were to defend against an attack by Goeben/Breslau?

   Probably, but uncertain since her logbook covering this time was lost with the boat.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   File:MARIOTTE xxx 1a.jpg - is there a better source for this? I didn't see anything on the forum that said it was from a postcard (though I didn't look very hard)

   Replaced with a scan of the postcard.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

   File:Franse-duikboot-WO-I.jpg - needs a source

   Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:10, 11 July 2015 (UTC)

• ping--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:25, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Whoops, I had started looking at this the other day and then got distracted. Everything looks good to me, so passing now. Parsecboy (talk) 20:33, 15 July 2015 (UTC)