Talk:French cruiser Du Chayla/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:36, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:36, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
- I'm sure that some of the comments from the Cassard review will apply here as well.
- I think I've got everything
- Images appropriately licensed
- Error with the italicization in the last para of the lede
- Fixed
- You already know about Casablanca, add a link to the article in the lede
- Done
- Comma after Portugal, which should probably be linked to the period appropriate govt
- Done
- Halpern's book on the Med Fleet in the 1920s should be checked for all Black Sea ops in 1919-1921, even the French
- I don't think he references Du Chayla specifically - and since I don't know when in 1919 she left, I'd be leery of including even a boilerplate description of what the fleet was up to. Parsecboy (talk) 17:00, 29 June 2020 (UTC)
- That would be good since he doesn't mention any of the French protected cruisers at all. ;-) Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:09, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
- I don't think he references Du Chayla specifically - and since I don't know when in 1919 she left, I'd be leery of including even a boilerplate description of what the fleet was up to. Parsecboy (talk) 17:00, 29 June 2020 (UTC)