Talk:French cruiser Châteaurenault (1898)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:21, 18 July 2020 (UTC)Reply


Criteria

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1. Prose   On hold

2. Verifiability   On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous   On hold

Comments

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1.

  • Length is given as 140 m in the infobox, and as 135 m in the prose
    • Fixed
  • Beam is given as 17 m in the prose and as 18 m in the infobox
    • Fixed
  • Draft is given as 7.39 m in the prose and 7.5 in the infobox
    • Fixed
  • Displacement is 7898 in the prose and 8200 in the infobox
    • Fixed
  • Complement is 604 in the prose and 625 in the infobox
    • Fixed
  • Isn't it standard to have the range in the infobox?
    • Yup, good catch
  • " cast iron, AP, and SAP projectiles" - I can tell what AP and SAP stand for, but the acronyms should be introduced instead of just brought it
    • Huh, I could've sworn I did that when I wrote that section - must have gotten distracted
  • Isn't armor plating typically in the infobox for these ships, too?
    • Yes indeed - added
  • Prose says keel laying in May 1896, infobox says 12 October 1895*
    • Fixed

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  • The exact commissioning date of 10 October 1902 is not cited, only the month and year are.
    • Fixed
  • Namesake is not cited
    • Removed
  • Shouldn't Garbett go before Gardiner in the ordering of the references?
    • Yep
  • The succeeded by class needs cited
    • I don't think there's an expectation that nav templates need sources

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  • The short description of "ship" is a bit lacking, something like "French protected cruiser" would be better.
    • Added that

The infobox needs quite a bit of work. Hog Farm Bacon 04:20, 19 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Yeah, I forgot to overhaul the box when I finished writing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 00:57, 20 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
Passing. Hog Farm Bacon 02:30, 20 July 2020 (UTC)Reply