Talk:Forum of Private Business
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Major editing
editI'm cutting out large swaths of this article, as it reads like an advertisement.
One point in particular: the timeline. First, all of this is unsourced, which is a problem. Second, it's highly dubious--we need some very strong evidence to show that the legislation and other actions enacted by the government were done directly as a result of FPB work. We need independent reliable sources that demonstrate this causal connection. Third, the combining of this info with other real world events is pure original research. Why were those particular events chosen? What is being implied by aligning them with supposed FPB actions? So, for now, I removed everything but the parts directly alleged to be connected to FPB. However, if this info can't be verified by reliable sources, the whole section should be removed. Qwyrxian (talk) 05:26, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
- And the quotes from the PM were removed, even though related to FPB, because we can't provide unsourced quotes ever (that violates the plagiarism policy). Qwyrxian (talk) 05:28, 12 April 2011 (UTC)