Talk:Ford Piquette Avenue Plant/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Iazyges in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:17, 9 March 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
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Prose Suggestions edit
Please note that these are suggestions, not requirements.
- Built in 1904, it was the second center of automobile production for the Ford Motor Company. suggest you change this to Built in 1904, it was the second center of automobile production for the Ford Motor Company, after [whatever the first center was].
- Plans for the new car were announced on March 19, 1908. is the "new car" here the Model T? If so I suggest Plans for the new car, the Model T, were announced on March 19, 1908.
- @Jackdude101: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:16, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
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