Talk:Foam party

Photo request

I have uploaded several photos from a foam party at a local nightclub. Are these adequate?

-HyperLight

There are alot of unverified claims here... Danger Will Robinson! Hardy (talk) 16:23, 14 December 2007 (UTC)

Modifications

Changed tone of the article away from a howto style. Marked specific places where a citation may be necessary. Removed unimportant or unrelated information. Refactored content for logical flow. Medical journals should be consulted for specific health issues; and generally speaking, the article needs more (any) references. The references in the article text to the specific foam party in the pictures is difficult to verify. Three pictures may be more than necessary to showcase this type of event, I suggest the middle picture, "club patron enjoys atmosphere", be removed.  Rmaus  07:14, 19 April 2008 (UTC)

Adding news story to safety section regarding deaths in Turkey as a result of a foam party on July 23

I'm fairly new to Wikipedia. Would this be appropriate to add to the safety section? If so, what level of detail is appropriate:

On July 23, 2008, at 11:30 p.m., a foam party at the Venezia Palace Hotel in Antalya, Turkey, ended in the deaths of 2 tourists from Israel and one Turkish citizen, as a result of electrocution. The tourists were brothers Shai and Nir Hachim, aged 18 and 14 respectively, of Holon, Israel.

Sources:

1. Hotnews Turkey, July 24, 2008 [1] Retrieved July 24, 2008

2. Jerusalem Post, July 23, 2008 [2] Retrieved July 24, 2008

3. Haaretz, July 23, 2008 [3], Retrieved July 24, 2008

Thanks

Womanitoba (Womanitoba (talk) 20:44, 24 July 2008 (UTC)).