Talk:Five Finger Death Punch/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SMasters (talk) 08:08, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   There are some minor issues with the prose:

   1. There is a spacing problem with a comma in this line"They have released six top ten singles: "The Bleeding", "Never Enough", "Hard to See", "Walk Away" ,"Bad Company" and "Far from Home"." It causes the comma to start a sentence on my screen.
   2. Every single sentence in the third paragraph starts with "They", and two out of three sentences in the 2nd para starts with "They".
   3. Full dates including the year, should have a comma after the year. E.g. "...September 2, 2007[,] the band..."
   4. This is not consistent with the rest: "October 3rd through November 4, 2010". I suggest you delete the "rd" and use a dash.

 Fixed

1. B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   The picture of Jason Hook causes the War Is the Answer heading to indent. Move the picture higher of make it smaller.

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Not bad overall, just a few minor issues to be fixed and we should be there. – SMasters (talk) 08:35, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

OK, everything seems to have been fixed and I'm now happy to promoted it. – SMasters (talk) 11:48, 3 March 2011 (UTC)