Talk:First Person Shooter (The X-Files)/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 15:41, 21 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Plot
  • "The woman, a stripper named Jade Blue Afterglow, she tells the agents that she was paid by a medical imaging facility in Culver City to scan her body." needs copyediting.
Production
  • "According to Executive producer Frank Spotnitz", does 'Executive' need to be capitalised?

Only niggly problems I could find. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 15:43, 21 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thank you very much for the review. I believe I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon 01:18, 22 May 2012 (UTC)Reply