Talk:Federation of the Green Parties of the Americas

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Aside from the non-encyclopedic tone (which I obviously plan to change), it seems that most of what's here really isn't even about the Federation of the Green Parties of the Americas. The Green Party of the US already has its own page -- which makes it clear that the state parties are autonomous and that Green politics are generally local -- so the second two paragraphs seem wholly unnecessary in the context of an article on the federation.

So what I plan to do is to clean up the tone of, Wikify, and slightly expand the first paragraph, while striking the latter two. I'll add a "See Also" section for the Green Parties in the Federation of he Americas, as well as a link to the English section of the Federation's website (which is, I might add, incredibly cumbersome to operate).

If there are any objections, leave them here in the next 18 or so hours; otherwise, I plan to make the said changes tomorrow morning (EST).

Brenton 19:50, May 28, 2005 (UTC)