Talk:Federales (Argentina)

Hey Matt. This was really good detailed writing. I did not see any grammar or spelling mistakes. The structure of your article flows very nicely. I Thought that it would be good to add a lead paragraph because you kind of get thrown into the article without much context. It would also been helpful to have some chronological context, so adding dates would be helpful I think. I also did not know much about the Argentine Civil Wars, so adding more context specifically about them, even just a few sentences, would be helpful. I have to do this too, but it would be better if you diversified and expanded your sources. It would be interesting if you could find any primary sources that were written at the time of the Civil War. Was the Federalist Party a political party or just a belligerent within the Civil War? If they were a political party maybe expand beyond detailing de Rosas's governorship. Also how did the caudillos unify? You mention it, but I'm interested in how de Rosas achieved that. Your writing is very neutral and seems like it fits Wikipedia's standards. You have a really good base that I think could be improved dramatically by just a few small additions. Great job. These are very specific, but in the third sentence in "The Fall of Federalism" paragraph there is some weird formatting, and I think the first paragraph in "Party Leadership" could be split into two once you get into the specific leaders. Joverholser (talk) 00:15, 11 April 2017 (UTC)