Talk:Eynsford Castle/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 02:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

I will review this one, comments to follow. Zawed (talk) 02:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

Apologies for the delay, missed the review! Changes should be all made now. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:53, 8 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Comments

  • "...Odo was arrested by the King.": I suggest linking the King to William the Conqueror for those not that familiar with English history.
  • I think someone got there before me! Hchc2009 (talk) 18:53, 8 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • "...the lady of Horton Kirby.": Not sure of nomenclature for nobility here but shouldn't lady be title case?
  • I'm not sure - is it was Lady Horton Kirby, definitely, but if it is just "the lady of..." I don't think it is. Happy to be corrected by any nobility specialists though! Hchc2009 (talk) 18:53, 8 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • link Edward Cresy?
  • in the architecture section, link "an inner and an outer bailey" (they are linked in the lede)
  • the units used in respect of dimensions are inconsistent; either in metres or feet followed by a conversion. In the history section, metres is used first, while in the architecture section, it is mostly feet used first.
  • I fixed the odd missing word as I went through, please doublecheck these.
  • Image tags check out OK.

Other than the above, the article looks in good shape. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 05:22, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

    • All good, passed as GA. Zawed (talk) 09:11, 13 November 2016 (UTC)Reply