Talk:Express (Christina Aguilera song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:45, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

• Upon its release, "Express" received generally favorable reviews → The "Upon its release," bit seems a bit unnecessary.
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• the song attained moderate → it attained moderate
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• Following the release of her sixth studio album, Bionic, Aguilera planned to embark on the Bionic Tour and promote it further. → In support of her sixth studio album, Bionic, Aguilera announced plans for the Bionic Tour.
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• On May 24, 2010, in a message on her website and from tour promoter Live Nation, Aguilera stated that due to the excessive promotion of the album and her then upcoming film debut in Burlesque, she felt she needed more time to rehearse the show and with less than a month between the album release and tour, it was not possible to create and perform a show at the level that her fans expect from her. → However, on May 24, 2010, the singer and tour promoter Live Nation both posted messages on their websites stating that due to excessive promotion of Bionic and preparing for her upcoming film debut in Burlesque, she felt she would need more time to be able to put together a show that her fans deserve to see. Aguilera stated that this was not possible to do in less than one month between the release of the album and the start of the tour as she would need more time to rehearse.
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• On the accompanying soundtrack for the film, Aguilera had worked with Tricky Stewart. Stewart was the co-writer and producer of two songs, "Show Me How You Burlesque" and "Express", and also produced a number of tracks, including "Something's Got a Hold on Me", "Tough Lover" and "But I Am a Good Girl". → For the accompanying soundtrack for the film, Aguilera worked with Tricky Stewart; he co-wrote and produced two songs, "Show Me How You Burlesque" and "Express", and produced several other tracks including "Something's Got a Hold on Me", "Tough Lover" and "But I Am a Good Girl".

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• span on two → spans two
  • I think it should be "span" not "spans" ? Because "vocals" not "vocal" ?
    • But that actually doesn't make sense. "Span on two" is not right grammatically. Two is plural so it should be spans.
• Need a credits and personnel section
  • I don't have the booklet of Burlesque, sorry.
    • I have the digital one so I will look.  — AARON • ^TALK 11:14, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
• The table should have the shaded column for access.
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• I don't know if it's just me, but the right hand side line of the peak position column is open and has no line.
  • It has line. Maybe it's just you.
• UK R&B before UK Singles, alphabetise.
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• None of the references should have words in block capitals in the titles
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• iTunes Store should not be italics.
• Official Charts Company, no "The". It's not used anymore.
• MTV News should not be italics.
  •  Done all – HĐ (talk) 02:40, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Status

On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 15:38, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

• Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 11:14, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

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