Talk:Europa and the Pirate Twins/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Grapple X in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 05:16, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- Arr! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:16, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
Checklist
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | ||
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Fine | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Fine | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Fine | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Fine | |
7. Overall assessment. | Pending |
Comments
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- That the song had a music video should be stated in "release", it comes out of nowhere in #Reception. Perhaps a description of the music video's plot/storyline (cited to the video) would be acceptable. Vevo could be linked, that wouldn't be a copyright violation.
- Not sure if sources are available for this, but information on the meaning of the title and whatnot would be useful.
- Haven't seen anything other than the song's lyrics themselves; it's about a girl called Europa, and she and Dolby apparently played about as "the pirate twins" as children. GRAPPLE X 20:30, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- Interesting, cuz it appears there is a comic book with the same name. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:28, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- Odd. Related? GRAPPLE X 00:47, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- Nothing I can find. Looks like the book was published in 1996. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:02, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- Odd. Related? GRAPPLE X 00:47, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- Interesting, cuz it appears there is a comic book with the same name. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:28, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- Haven't seen anything other than the song's lyrics themselves; it's about a girl called Europa, and she and Dolby apparently played about as "the pirate twins" as children. GRAPPLE X 20:30, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- I'll try to see if I can dig up anymore sources, this is rather threadbare.
- This may have something useful.
- Perhaps note that he was considered a "one-hit wonder"
- Note that it was his first single with a major studio, from his first album?
- Note that it was released on his own label under Parlophone?
- "Eastern Bloc" is "surprisingly faithful"?
- Added this but the citation is pretty light given that a lot of info is missing from the entry there (issue, volume, date, author, etc). GRAPPLE X 20:28, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, they're all snippet view (eh, when you're desperate...). One-hit wonder in the US, right. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:18, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
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- Might be, but I'll leave that to you. I only provided some suggestions. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:57, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
Further discussion
edit- It's quite short but I've been unable to find any more info. As such, I am passing this. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:04, 28 August 2012 (UTC)