Talk:Eternal Pyre/GA2

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GA Review

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Reviewer: --CallMeNathanTalk2Me 01:13, 5 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

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  • Release date needs source
  • Recording studio needs source
  • Eternal Pyre features three tracks total -> in
  • Their performance was positivly commented on, saying that "King and Jeff Hanneman riff like they're summoning a storm of thunder, lightning and human blood," and was also noted to be a "low-tuned, two-string vamp that slithers into the foreground creates a tension as Lombardo's cymbals call the band into the riff that opens the tune. It's slow, meaty, unrelenting in its tautness. When Araya's voice comes in, the whole track is off the rails and stays there" "War Ensemble" was filmed live from Germany, and contains four minutes of studio footage. Lyrics were said to "please fans still harboring a grudge from Catholic school." -> run-on. Needs to be cut up and some quotes need to be filtered.
  • Eternal Pyre generally not received well by critics -> re-write
  • The extended play was, however, generally well-received by fans, despite having a limited number of copies available. -> Source?
  • With a limited pressing of 1,000 copies, was exclusively -> Fix up
  • Originally, it was thought that the extended play would feature a live version of "Dead Skin Mask" instead of the live version of "War Ensemble", and also was thought to have featured the "Live Intrusion" video, described as "a five-minute clip of the Slayer fan who carved the band's name into his forearm." -> should consider splitting
  • Personnel -> Needs sources
  • Hit parade isn't a chart. Its the official chart for Switzerland.
  • Chart should be capitalized
  • The countries listed should have links to their providers. AKA UK -> (BPI)

That's all, fix these please.--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 18:13, 11 November 2010 (UTC)Reply