Talk:Ernie Cooksey/GA1

GA Review

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Overall this article is good, though I did find a few things that need fixing:

• Ref #24 ("Why a single ring on the phone will spell the end for Boston") is a dead link.
  • Fixed
• "Cooksey joined Oldham Athletic on trial in July 2003,[10] and in August, at the age of 23, he stepped up three leagues into professional football permanently when Iain Dowie signed him on for financially troubled Oldham, who were playing in the Second Division." This feels kinda run-on-ish.
  • Reworded/rearranged/split sentence.
• "He made 37 Second Division appearances for Oldham in the 2003–04 season, scoring three goals." The infobox says 4 goals. Fix whichever's wrong.
  • Link is working now - odd because I pasted the link and saved, but it was the same as the old one. Anyway, saved and is works fine!

Besides that, this is a nice article. I'll put it on hold and give you a couple days to fix it. Wizardman 23:43, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Edits suggested done. Thanks for the review, --Jimbo^[online] 08:21, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

Alright then, everything looks good. Wizardman 15:51, 3 June 2009 (UTC)