Talk:Environmentalism in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 10:27, 20 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking this on, as always. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • "remarked by" → " remarked upon by"?
    • Done.
  • The link to Fangorn under Wild Nature is for the character, not the forest.
    • Fixed.
  • Link Tree and Leaf.
    • Linked.
  • "of the Shire, and Treebeard" → Comma unnecessary.
    • Fixed.
  • Link Aragorn under Industrial Hell.
    • Linked.
  • Under The Scouring of the Shire, Hobbits is uncapitalized.
    • Fixed.
  • Nice work overall, and with the rate you're going at, I wouldn't be surprised to find that Tolkien's works are the best-covered topic on Wikipedia. AryKun (talk) 13:31, 20 January 2022 (UTC)Reply