Talk:Entren Los Que Quieran/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 09:02, 8 November 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

• This infobox seems empty - Why aren't the parameters length and language being used? (I will take care of this part)
• In the recording parameter write: Puerto Rico, Miami, Florida

Lead

• Wikilink Latin Albums and Rap Albums

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• Why isn't it noted that the album charted internationally in the lead?

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• The lead seems short - Can you consider expanding it? (Maybe adding that the record spawned seven singles, and mentioning that "Latinoamerica" reached the top ten of both the Billboard Latin Digital Songs and Latin Rhythm Digital Songs charts will help or mentioning collaborations from the album)

• I have expanded it, how's it looking now? Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Background and recording

• "Drawing influence from a more diverse array of musical styles..." - Can you provide examples?

• The sentence later says "...such as samba, candombe, and electronica." Basilisk4u (talk) 20:08, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

Awesome! DivaKnockouts (talk) 01:09, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

• Wikilink San Juan

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• Both sound samples need to be replaced with smaller versions to comply with Wikipedia's non-free content policy and United States copyright law. A full copy of a song, or high bit-rate sample [Reduce the quality of the samples please] is questionable fair use and may be deleted per Wikipedia's copyright policy. A sample can be taken from an audio file using an audio editing program. Such tools can also be used to reduce the bit-rate to below 64 Kbps. (Your samples are 130 kbps & 30 seconds each)

• I am pretty terrible at dealing with the audio files, so I may need to recruit someone for help on this part. Basilisk4u (talk) 19:02, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

Done! DivaKnockouts (talk) 01:09, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

• Wikilink Reggaeton

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• Wikilink Peru, Colombia, and Brazil

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Singles

• Why don't the other singles include release dates?
• Did "Calma Pueblo" and "Baile de los Pobres" have any chart success?
• "Latinoamerica" peaked at #9 on the Billboard Latin Digital Songs and #3 on the Latin Rhythm Digital Songs chart. - Make "chart" plural
  • Since I added the singles section, I already checked to see if those ranked on any charts, but it appears they didn't. As for first one, some songs are only released on radio airplay which it makes hard to verify the exact date it was released. Erick (talk) 18:04, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
    • Ahh, okay, I see. But shouldn't be noted that they're were released radio airplay? DivaKnockouts (talk) 01:14, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Reception

• "Mariano Prunes of Allmusic gave the Entren Los Que Quieran 3 and a half stars out of five..." - Do you mean "gave the album"?

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• Also, why is the 3 in numeric form but the five written out? Stay consistent with numbers please.

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

• Needs source for track listing

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

• Entren Los Que Quieran also charted on the Billboard Top Current Albums chart in 2010 - Here is the peak position

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:56, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• Add the year 2011 under the table for 2010, as the album also charted on the Billboard Latin Rhythm Albums chart in 2011 - Here the peak position

I'm sorry, I'm a bit confused about how I should do this. Should I add another chart? Basilisk4u (talk) 08:56, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

• The year-end chart performance for Latin Albums needs to be delinked, you already linked it in the weekly charts

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Awards

• This section isn't referenced, Is it even needed as you explain the awards won by the album in the Accolades section.

References

• FN#1 wikilink Billboard (magazine) and Prometheus Global Media
• FN#2 wikilink NY Daily News
• FN#7 don't italic Allmusic, also wikilink it
• FN#8 wikilink National Public Radio
• FN#11 wikilink Los Angeles Times
• FN#13 wikilink iTunes, also Apple Inc. publishes iTunes
• FN#29 wikilink The Tufts Daily

(For references, try to wikilink everything the first time you use them)

 Done with all :) Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Misc

• I think this article could benefit from an image from Commons (Perphaps you could include an image of Maria Rita and explain her contribution to the album)

• I added a picture of Omar Rodríguez-López, who played on "Calma Pueblo", because I felt a bit sad only putting a picture of one of the singers in "Latinoamerica" and leaving out the other two :P Basilisk4u (talk) 08:43, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Second run Great job on everything above! Now, the last thing, please provide references for the opening acts on the Tour and the other dates that have no references and you will be good to go! (I see some sections of the table include references for that specific continent. If the reference is the same add it again to the other continents please.) DivaKnockouts (talk) 09:18, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Thanks! I've actually been thinking about making a separate page for the tour because I feel that the charts look a bit lengthy on this page, what do you think? Basilisk4u (talk) 00:20, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I think that would be the best idea, and then include a section in this article about the Tour. Let me know what you decide. DivaKnockouts (talk) 00:50, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I have now moved the tour information to its own article, and created a section for it in this article. Basilisk4u (talk) 21:20, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Okay, great. I will now past the article. Great job! :) DivaKnockouts (talk) 01:22, 3 December 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Great! Thanks so much for the review :) Basilisk4u (talk) 02:31, 3 December 2012 (UTC)

You're welcome! DivaKnockouts (talk) 02:39, 3 December 2012 (UTC)