Talk:Entoloma austroprunicolor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 18:26, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

I remember seeing this one at FPC. Nice looking article.

• "(haven a central rounded elevation resembling a nipple)" I assume you mean "having"?

• Yes, fixed. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• I'm not sure the link to adnation is useful, especially as it doesn't say anything about fungi

• I'm going to leave this link in, and add a bit to the adnation article later (probably a good idea as I've been linking to this in other articles). Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• "stipe measures 3–7.5 cm (1.2–3.0 in) tall and" Long?

• Fixed. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• "cortex" Jargon

• Trimmed. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• "contain granules that contain" Repetition

• Prose tweaked. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• "and has different microscopic features.[3]" Seeing as it's a short section, perhaps you could expand on these features?

• Not much to expand on from the source, but I added what it has. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

• Just a thought, and there may not be much you can expand upon here, but if it's common, why was it only described so recently?

• Australian fungi are notoriously underdescribed. I added a bit of background in the taxonomy section which may help explain the answer to your question. Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

I made a few small edits. A literature search threw up nothing you'd missed- clearly not a species that's been written about much, but there's certainly enough here for GA status. J Milburn (talk) 18:26, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

Thanks very much! Sasata (talk) 20:48, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

Happy with the fixes, and thanks for the clarification about why this was such a recent discovery. I'm going to go ahead and promote now- not the biggest or most exciting article, but seems to accurately reflect what has been published about this species. J Milburn (talk) 10:30, 16 September 2013 (UTC)