This reads like a whitepaper, not like an encyclopedia article. It would be most appreciated if the editor(s) responsible for this article would rewrite it into encyclopedic format. Kelly Martin 18:19, Jun 4, 2005 (UTC)
This reads like a whitepaper, not like an encyclopedia article. It would be most appreciated if the editor(s) responsible for this article would rewrite it into encyclopedic format. Kelly Martin 18:19, Jun 4, 2005 (UTC)