Talk:Emergency on Planet Earth/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Jens Lallensack in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 21:24, 26 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 21:24, 26 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • The song also "takes on everything from racism to corporate greed". – Quotes should generally be attributed; who said this?
  • the wars he seen on television. – should it be "had seen"?
  • With the fourth track "If I Like It I Do It" Kay said it reminded him of "Harvest for the World" by Isley Brothers,[1] its lyrics have been described as anarchist – this might need reformulation; it is not clear that "its" refers to the fourth track and not the track from Isley Brothers.
  • link syncopation?
  • Link UK chart? Link Platinum, Gold, b-sides?
  • and secured them a later deal with Sony – replace "them" with "the band", because the latter was not previously mentioned in that paragraph?
  • "mix[es] images of cruelty, blight, disaster and genocide" and of the Holocaust. – the Holocaust is a genocide, so this is a bit repetitive.
  • Because of the latter, it was banned in American MTV. – I wonder why?
  • That's all, nice work! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 22:00, 26 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
I should have everything addressed. I decided not to link gold since it would be duplicate with platinum linking to Music recording certification. 웃OO 00:39, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Congrats, great work! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 22:29, 27 January 2022 (UTC)Reply