Talk:Elastic Heart/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:53, 19 April 2015 (UTC)

General

• One dead link

• It is already archived at the Wayback Machine

Lead

• Could probably just be one paragraph to be honest.

Release and composition

• served → was released
• A self-directed music video → Who directed it?
• As one critic called it a pop song, this genre should also be added to the info box
• I don't think saying it has an electropop production translates as being an electro pop song.

Reception

• on the chart issue number 1233 → Not needed here. Put a note in the reference if anything.
• and was gold → I think a word is missing here.

Personnel

• Credits for "Elastic Heart" are adapted from The Hunger Games: Catching Fire soundtrack digital inlay cover → I'd put this at the bottom not the top
• Needs a full stop at the end of it too

Track listing

• This section can be omitted because it's just one version

Charts and certifications - Weekly charts

• 2013 and 2014 peaks should be listed separately

• As this was released in October (nearly end of the year) it is acceptable to include them in one table imo. HĐ (talk) 14:29, 27 April 2015 (UTC)

Sia solo version - Lead

• In the United Kingdom, the single peaked at number 10 on the UK Singles Chart on 5 April 2015.[41] It has since been certified Silver by the British Phonographic Industry.[42] → Just tack this onto the end of the previous paragraph. No point separating like this.

Sia solo version - Music video

• Having a block quote here doesn't work because of the picture, thus it's not indented.
• Block quote shouldn't have quotation marks either, as it is supposed to be indented, but it's not because the picture is interfering.

Sia solo version - Certifications

• Can include US sales here, just leave the certification bit blank

References

• Refs in a foreign language, like 63, should have language parameters

• As I use {{singlechart}} I cannot add the language parameter. Apart from that, everything is done. HĐ (talk) 14:29, 27 April 2015 (UTC)

• Outcome

On hold for 7 days.  — ₳aron 15:14, 26 April 2015 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for addressing. Passing.  — ₳aron 16:49, 27 April 2015 (UTC)

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