Talk:Edward Opoku/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Early life

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  Done
  • "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree all four years in high school" - in all
  Done, changed to "was a Western New England Prep School All-Select honoree in all four years of high school".
  Done
  Done

College and amateur

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  • "As a sophomore, Opoku found his stride," - avoid idioms per MOS:IDIOM
  Done, changed to "As a sophomore, Opoku netted six goals in 18 appearances for the Cavaliers."
  Done, linked in "after finishing the season with two goals and three assists."
  • "Opoku was named to the All-ACC Second Team at the end of the season." - season's end
  Done
  • "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference nod," - acknowledgement
  Done, changed to "He capped the season with his third consecutive all-conference honour".
  • "Opoku departed Virginia following the year, ending his collegiate career with 16 goals in 56 appearances for the Cavaliers." - this sentence requires a citation to a reliable source
  Done, linked to his Virginia profile.

AC Connecticut

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  Done
  • "joining up with the club for the 2017 PDL season." - joining the club is sufficient
  Done
  • "Opoku went on to appear four times on the year," - during
  Done
  • "Opoku scored once in four total appearances on the year, and concluded his two seasons with the club having played eight times and scored once." - need to be cited to a reliable source
  Done, linked to his PDL profile

Columbus Crew AC

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  • "the first Generation Adidas player drafted by Columbus since Dilly Duka in 2010." - that statement needs to be supported by a reliable source
  Done, moved the Massive Report reference to the end of the sentence since the ref covers that statement.
  • "beginning a stretch in which he appeared in four consecutive matches, and concluded the season with six appearances in all competitions." - another reliable source is needed here
  Done, linked to his Columbus profile.

That's all from my perspective. On hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 22 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: I believe I've just about covered everything you've brought up, let me know if any of my changes still ned a bit of adjustment. Otherwise, thanks for the review (the second you've done for one of my nominations, I believe!) 21.colinthompson (talk) 23:17, 22 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
@21.colinthompson: Nothing else I could find so am now able to promote this article to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 11:55, 23 February 2019 (UTC)Reply