GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
    Remember to avoid contractions (such as "didn't").
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    I am interpreting the criteria as such: For a person it may be difficult to get a photograph, and since fair use cannot be used for living people, only if an image is available on the Commons would an image be required. On the other hand, I am a bit skeptical in including the document as an image. I will not remove it, but I would not have included it myself. Including portions of primary sources is not the job of Wikipedia.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    A clear, good article. It reads well, is interesting, stays to the point and covers all relevant areas. Congratulations on a nice piece of work!