Major rewrite, removed instructional tone, and added encyclopaedic tone. Couldn't have done it without the previous work of User:EternalSleeper and User:64.230.62.244 Alexs letterbox 09:57, 11 Feb 2005 (UTC)
- I've taken this back to a stub. It was badly written, badly spelled, and completely unreferenced. That is not an acceptable standard for a Wikipedia article. If it's to be rewritten, please cite your sources and make sure words are spelled correctly. Please check Wikipedia:No original research, Wikipedia:Cite sources, and Wikipedia:Verifiability. Many thanks, SlimVirgin 03:29, Feb 15, 2005 (UTC)
- It seems that way to me.. it would fit in well and bring more attention to this issue than having a simple stub --Aika 22:58, Mar 3, 2005 (UTC)