Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2019 and 26 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dhebe48. Peer reviewers: NimeshaRajapaksha.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:55, 16 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer review edit

The article flow nicely. However, if you can give more information regarding the history and elaborate further on the three main compartments, it would be great. Adding more diagrams and a image of the real instrument also helpful to better understanding. NimeshaRajapaksha (talk) 17:15, 16 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Enlarge the diagram request. NimeshaRajapaksha (talk) 01:39, 9 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

It is better if you can remove the "stub" in external links. NimeshaRajapaksha (talk) 01:45, 9 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

Added diagram and removed request. Egmason (talk) 09:33, 7 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Possible Relevant Sources edit

Dass, Chhabil (2006). Fundamentals of Contemporary Mass Spectrometry. Hoboken, New Jersey: John Wiley & Sons, Inc. p. 104. ISBN 9780470118498.
Duoplasmatron Ion Source, A Dissertation by Ahmed Ghander (March `1972) Dhebe48 (talk) 04:04, 14 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Dass is more of a tertiary source (see WP:PSTS). You want refs more like this: doi:10.1063/1.1720740 --Kkmurray (talk) 18:06, 14 February 2019 (UTC)Reply