Talk:Drummond family (Oklahoma)
Latest comment: 8 months ago by Lucy Kemnitzer in topic Paragraph about the road and the Osage Nation
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Drummond lineage and facts edit
This is a very loose and inaccurate representation of the Drummonds 2601:144:380:D610:54E3:124E:19AE:3467 (talk) 02:21, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
Paragraph about the road and the Osage Nation edit
The last sentence is unclear. The word "petition" doesn't appear till that sentence, so who filed a petition? The Drummonds or the Osage Nation? What does deciding the petition doesn't merit a hearing mean for the road? Is it privatized or not? Lucy Kemnitzer (talk) 05:19, 15 September 2023 (UTC)Lucy Kemnitzer
- The article is linked after the paragraph. I'll take a look at re-writing the sentence for clarity later. Here is the news article though if you want more info: https://osagenews.org/county-commissioners-dismiss-proposal-from-drummonds/
- Answering your questions (based on the article cited):
- 1) Drummonds filed the petition.
- 2) deciding the petition doesn't merit a hearing mean the privatization effort failed.
- 3) the road is not privatized. TulsaPoliticsFan (talk) 14:32, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- the paragraph needs to say those things in words as clear as that. Lucy Kemnitzer (talk) 09:35, 16 September 2023 (UTC)