Talk:Dressin' Up/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by (CA)Giacobbe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 12:09, 25 December 2013 (UTC)
Hi (CA)Giacobbe, I'll be doing this review.
- General
- Disambiguation links: Correct this link.
- This was a link from a previous edition, no longer in the article anymore.
- Checklinks: Nothing to correct.
- Original research: The lead section seems to explain that lyrically, it talks about Perry changing outfits and stuff, but nothing about it appears in the article body?
- Lead section: Above.
- In depth
- Background:
- Change of tense in first paragraph: "told MTV that he is back" → "told MTV that he was back"
- Maybe change the second instance of Teenage Dream to [the album], so it's not repeated again.
- Last sentence: "Stewart said that one of the songs is titled "Dressing Up" → "The record producer also revealed that one of the songs was titled "Dressing Up"
- Recording
- Maybe divide the section in two paragraphs, with the second paragraph starting in "Drum programming..."
- Suggestions
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- Just an idea, but maybe put the image to the right, and expand its size so it covers both sections. It would look better.
Just correct these issues and I'll pass this. This article is rather short, but I understand, since there weren't many websites reviewing The Complete Confection. Good work! Prism △ 12:09, 25 December 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, all the issues are fixed! (CA)Giacobbe (talk) 18:25, 25 December 2013 (UTC)