Talk:Dispute between Darnhall and Vale Royal Abbey/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (16% is highest, due to both having source names and a few incidental parallels.) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links Y

Prose Suggestions

Lead

• I would expand the lead if possible.
• but repeatedly failed to persuade the abbot or the King suggest but despite repeated attempts, were unable to persuade either the abbot or the King

Background

• The revolt of Darnhall and Over was thus one of many villein uprisings before the Peasants' Revolt of June 1381. suggest The revolt of Darnhall and Over was thus one of many small villein uprisings before the Peasants' Revolt of June 1381.

• @Serial Number 54129: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:26, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
• Thanks as ever Iazyges—yes the lead did need a little something  :) sorted now, I think. Cheers! ...SerialNumber54129^{...speculates} 18:53, 6 March 2018 (UTC)