Talk:Derek Dougan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Blackburn Rovers

• "a 4–0 win over Fulham, which began a sequence of five wins and a draw from Rovers's first six matches," - reptition of win(s)
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
• "the dourness of the club matched that of the town.I " - needs to be spaced out
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Peterbrough United

• "The move did though have it's benefits" - its
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Leicester City

• ""Foxes" to a seventh-place finish." - I think team would be better than the club's nickname
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Wolverhampton Wanderers

• "who quit the game to become a full-time Jehovah's Witness volunteer." - left
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
• Delink Portugal, Hungary, Italy and the Netherlands per WP:OVERLINK
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
• "Spurs" goalkeeper Pat Jennings putting in an excellent performance " - exellent is NPOV
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
• "but managed to deny Leeds United the championship by beating Leeds on the final day of the season to prevent them from reaching Derby County's point tally," - reptition of Leeds
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Media career

• Do we know what was the name of the half-hour show he presented on BBC Radio Birmingham?
  • No.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Chairmanship of Wolves

• Delink Saudis
  • Done.--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

References

• no dead links

On hold until the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:20, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

• Have acted on them. Thanks!--EchetusXe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Well done. Can promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:21, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Red Links

Links in red for seasons still untidy, will attend to them at some point unless someone else has a fast way to do it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1.152.107.52 (talk) 15:21, 16 May 2018 (UTC)