Talk:Death Has a Shadow/GA2

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Xtzou in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 16:16, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi, I am reviewing this article. I have copy edited it for prose problems. However some remain:

  • "The movie Peter and his friends is a reference to the 1942 American romantic drama Casablanca." - there must be some words missing.
  • Ref 30 is a dead link: http://bobspoetry.com/Bobs02Mr.pdf
  • I don't see where ref 23 references the relevant material " Chabert left the series due to time constraints with her acting role in Party of Five, as well as schoolwork."
  • What is the full reference: Callaghan, pp. 14-17? The full information should be provided. Callaghan links to Death Has a Shadow but I don't understand why.

I will put the article on hold for seven days. Xtzou (Talk) 16:16, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply


Most of the things are done. --Pedro J. the rookie 23:07, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Ok. Thanks! Xtzou (Talk) 23:34, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  }
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: