Talk:Daoud ibn al-Adid/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AhmadLX (talk · contribs) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

I will review this over the next few days. --AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

• Lead is too short.
• al-Ḥāmid li'llāh and al-Ḥāmid li-'llāh
• No diacritics per MOS (walī al-ʿahd -> wali al-ahd etc.)
• 'Hidden Imam' should link to Occultation
• Briefly introduce Qadi al-Fadil, Baha al-Din Qaraqush

A nice little article. I would have preferred some more detail, but given the dearth of info in the sources (I checked some of them), I think I can compromise on broadness. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:30, 2 March 2023 (UTC)

Hi AhmadLX, thanks for taking the time to review this. I think I've addressed your points. Anything else? Constantine ✍ 13:00, 9 March 2023 (UTC)

No that was all from me, and this is a Pass. Nice work. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:38, 10 March 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed