Talk:Dangerously in Love 2/GA1

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Reviewer: Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this shortly =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

• The song later became the title track to Knowles' debut album of the same name, Dangerously in Love < cut out “of the same name, Dangerously In Love”  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• spawned generally < spawned a generally  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• of positive reception < of positive reviews  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• retitled < titled  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• No official music video exists for the song, though the performance on her Live at Wembley DVD was frequently aired on BET. < proof?

I removed it. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

• According to the sheet music published at Music Notes by Hal Leonard Corporation, < unnecessary

If you see recent GAs, this is how the composition section is written. It should have a sentence stating from where the music sheet was taken and who published it. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

• After doing the above suggestion comebine the next two sentence like "Dangerously in Love" is a moderate R&B-quiet storm ballad pacing in medium time while also containing samples of soul music.

Related to above. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

• According to < cut out  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• was generally positively received < received mostly positive reviews  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine gave a mixed review of the song, stating that although superfluous, it seemed a bit dated: "Unfortunately, the album is bottom-heavy with mid-tempo numbers and R&B balladry; a near-carbon copy of Survivor's melodramatic "Dangerously in Love" is completely superfluous [...]". < Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine gave a mixed review of the song, stating that it seemed a bit dated and that it was “a near-carbon copy of Survivor’s melodramatic “Dangerously in Love” [that] is completly superfluous.”  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• half-a-million of ringtones. < five hundred thousand ringtones.  Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
• Your live performance sections is really unclear since you keep switching from place to place. Go back and organize in accordingly to make it more sense.

I will do this after 18 hours. I have to go to school. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

 Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 11:58, 14 March 2011 (UTC)

Finish this and I will come back.--Blackjacks101 (talk) 14:47, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. Jivesh • Talk2Me 18:15, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

Much better now =D....passing--Blackjacks101 (talk) 13:05, 14 March 2011 (UTC)