Talk:Dan Povenmire/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 00:23, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

right, man wiered that this not a ga yet well, here are some comments:

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• every thing seems fine but the personal life it is a bit short and putting an image in a section so short dose not, help.
  • Removed the image. The Flash ^{talk} 00:33, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

• show me the age that he has many pepole are intrestedc in that i am a fan of that.
  • Unfortunately, neither his age nor his birthday is available anywhere. The Flash ^{talk} 00:33, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

• this is just a suggestion merge education with child hood(suggesting)
  • I think they're both long enough to sustain separate sections. The Flash ^{talk} 00:33, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

• as in phineas and ferb i suggest you put a main over rockos mordern life and family guy.
  • Well, the thing is, for Phineas and Ferb, all the info there is available on the actual main article, but for the other too, it's not there at all. The Flash ^{talk} 00:33, 25 October 2009 (UTC)
• the lead should have that he is married.
  •  Done The Flash ^{talk} 00:33, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

refrences

• pass

images

• pass

It is long with lots of info so i think it is right plus i have read good thimgs about the shape of this artical fron other users.

to be true this artical looks FA potential, suggestion if planning to this man has worked for Family guy and is important to the group and disney as well so ask, feel free to review the family guy cast.--Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 00:23, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

• • Thanks for the review. I actually am planning to nominate this for FA status a week or so after this review is done. The Flash ^{talk} 00:34, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

PASS--Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 00:38, 25 October 2009 (UTC)