Talk:Dairy in India/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Векочел in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Векочел (talk · contribs) 00:14, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- Give me a few days to look at this. Векочел (talk) 00:14, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this on! – SD0001 (talk) 12:05, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- Seconded :) AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:31, 25 September 2020 (UTC)
- In the lead we have Most of the milk produced comes from buffaloes; cow milk is a close second, and goat milk a distant third. Maybe the term cow should be linked? Векочел (talk) 00:18, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- Cuisine: I suggest combining the last three paragraphs into just one paragraph. Векочел (talk) 21:46, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- Done. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:25, 25 September 2020 (UTC)
- Use of buffaloes: The Murrah is the best breed for dairy. Can you explain why Murrah is the best breed? Векочел (talk) 21:52, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
- I removed that because I couldn't find other sourcing about it and didn't really understand it either. (SD0001, feel free to revert if you have other sources.) AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:28, 25 September 2020 (UTC)
- Also in section Use of buffaloes towards the bottom: It is preferred for production of high-fat dairy products such as paneer, though cow milk is preferred for chhena. This needs a citation. Векочел (talk) 01:17, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Done. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 01:55, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Ok, good to go :) Векочел (talk) 05:01, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Congrats SD0001 and AleatoryPonderings I found this an interesting article. Векочел (talk) 05:11, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks so much for your review, Векочел!! Very much appreciated :) Who woulda thunk that a miserable substub up for deletion a month ago could become a GA so quickly. Thanks again. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 05:25, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks Векочел. Any comments on the FAC-worthiness of this article? – SD0001 (talk) 09:38, 27 September 2020 (UTC)
- Done. AleatoryPonderings (talk) 01:55, 27 September 2020 (UTC)