Talk:DJ Got Us Fallin' in Love/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Calvin999 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:31, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
General edit
Done Fixed dead link
Info box edit
- You don't need to link Max Martin and Shellback twice. I'd unlink them as publishers.
- Done Unlinked
Lead edit
- No issues.
Background and composition edit
- was first leaked → a song can only leak once, so saying first is irrelevant
- Done Removed first
Critical reception edit
- It's either mixed or positive. I'm inclined to say mixed, as you proceed this by talking about a criticism.
- Done Changed to mix
- along "Hot Tottie" and "There Goes My Baby". → along with "Hot Tottie" and "There Goes My Baby".
- Done
- three-and-a-half starts → I think you can work out the mistake!
- Done Woops, corrected to stars
- whilst also → Apparently "whilst" is archaic or something now, so better to say "while"
- Done Ok, changed to while
- Though he noted the lyrics as repetitive, but stated → Despite citing the lyrics as repetitive, he thought
- Done Changed to your suggestion
Chart performance edit
- 2×/4× → We just write two times/four times
- Done
Music video edit
- No issues.
Live performances edit
- No issues.
Track listing edit
- No issues.
Credits and personnel edit
- No issues.
Charts and certifications edit
- The US charts should be in order, so Hot 100, then A/C, then Adult Pop, the Hot Dance, then Hot R&B.
- Done
- Can you make the two year end charts the same width length.
- Done
Release history edit
- No issues.
References edit
- Rap-Up is the work, Devin Lazerine is the publisher.
- Done
- FN39/40: Remove That Grape Juice. Big no no. Hugely unreliable, bias and self published website who have no qualifications.
- Done Oh, did not know that. Removed and replaced with reliable sources.
Summary edit
Oh hold. Aaron • You Da One 11:07, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- I think everything is good now. Rayman95 (talk) 18:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
- Passing. Aaron • You Da One 12:31, 20 August 2012 (UTC)