Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2005/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 19:13, 2 March 2024 (UTC)

• "Its best placing was fifth" to "Its best performance was a fifth-place finish"?
  • I tried it for a second, but calling it a performance in this type of article made it seem like I was talking about the "best performance" of a specific song, not performance in terms of success. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
• "and the prior year" to "and the previous year" maybe
• "broadcaster has used internal selections" to "broadcaster had used internal selections"
• "For this year" to "In 2004"
• "Christoforou previously represented" had
• With word of Christoforou's selection Alongside
• "broadcast on RIK 1, RIK Sat as well as online via cybc.cy" to "broadcast on RIK 1 and RIK Sat, as well as online via cybc.cy"
• "contained English translation" to "contained an English translation of the show"
• "Sokratis Soumelas (EMI Greece)" EMI Greece is his company, not a profession like you've included for the others
  • Somewhat clarified this. Sort of bound by the source. I don't know what he did at EMI. Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
• "points from 1–8, 10 and 12 to the" to "1–8, 10, or 12 points to the"
• "both evenings of the contest" to "both rounds of the contest"
• Refs seem generally reliable; will spot-check later.
• Images are fine. AryKun (talk) 16:12, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

@AryKun: I've taken a look at your initial comments and made some changes! Grk1011 (talk) 14:28, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

Okay, did some spot-checks, will pass now. AryKun (talk) 06:33, 12 March 2024 (UTC)