Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2003/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Amitchell125 in topic Passing

GA Review

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 17:02, 3 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Happy to review this article.

Review

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Lead section/infobox

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  • Unlink Latvia (as Riga is linked next to it)
  • himself is redundant

  Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

1 Background

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  • Link Yiannis Dimitrou ('Γιάννης Δημητράς' In the Greek Wikipedia, using {{ill|Yiannis Dimitrou|el|Γιάννης Δημητράς}}

  Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

2.1 Internal selection

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  • Link Riga; lyricist

  Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

2.2 Promotion

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  • Link V2 Records; Greek (Greek language)
  • Spain's Eurovision preparations – typo?
  • Link CD single in the caption

  Done - I removed the 's' from preparations. It can be plural too and make sense, but I don't mind it being singular either. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

3 At Eurovision

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  • Omit Latvia in Riga, Latvia (not needed, as it is already stated in the article)
  • Link backing vocalist
  • Amend was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, though they were able to to ‘who was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, was able to’, to improve the prose
  • following the entry from Croatia and preceding the entry from Germany seems over detailed, happy if you want to keep it in for consistency
  • in position nine – 'ninth' sounds better imo
  • Unlink postcard - it leads to a single sentence in another article. I would include the information there in a note in this article, or within the text of this section.
  • Unlink football (common term)

  Done I did tweak the injury sentence a bit more than you suggested. I liked having football linked because European football is definitely not the common term for me. I removed the link regardless though. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

3.1 Voting

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  • had placed 20th – 'had been placed 20th'

  Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

4 References

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  • Ref 2 – a source for the 2007 edition of O’Connor is available here (p.113), it might be useful to you and/or other readers if this source was used instead of the one stated
  • Ref 17 – it might be useful if the Greek title was translated (minor point)
  • Ref 18 (Eurovision Song Contest 2003. Riga, Latvia. 24 May 2003.) - cannot be verified

  Done Removed ref 18 as it was only supplemental. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

5 Further reading

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  • The title of this section should be Sources (or something similar). As O’Connor is cited, Further reading is incorrect

  Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

On hold

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Nice work. I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 12 January to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Amitchell125: Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed most of your concerns. My individual comments are above. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Passing

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Great stuff, passing the article now. Amitchell125 (talk) 16:57, 5 January 2022 (UTC)Reply