Talk:Cyberpunk (album)/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Erachima in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

Jumping straight to the heart of the matter, you pass, since this article meets and exceeds the GA standards. I'd still like to make a couple comments on the page though.

First off, this article is long. Really long. That's not too serious of a flaw at this stage, but you'll probably run into opposition at the FA review level for it, since it makes the page a real chore to read and even the world's best article isn't much good if no-one is willing to finish it. Consider paraphrasing some of the more extensive quotations.

Second, at the end of the section "Academic analysis" you mention that Shock to the System and its music video were analyzed for a bunch of things, but never what conclusion that analyst came to. You'll probably want to add that at some point. (The immediately following "re-release" section doesn't have a ref at the end of it, by the way, though I know I saw that fact referenced earlier in the article so I'm not marking you off for that.)

Finally, excellent work. You've written an article we can all be proud of. --erachima talk 04:49, 30 August 2008 (UTC)Reply