Talk:Cyanocobalamin reductase (cyanide-eliminating)

Grammar/Clarity edit - is this correct?

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I changed

   oxidoreductases, specifically those oxidizing metal ion with NAD+ or NADP+ as acceptor

to:

   .. those which oxidize metal ions and use NAD+ or NADP+ as an electron acceptor (for that oxidization reaction)

Is this correct use of the chemical terms?