Talk:Crustal recycling

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

Review by Stephen Reed

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  • Intro
  • I felt like I could understand this if I didn't know anything about it which is good.
  • Fate
  • I feel like this is a continuation of the intro, maybe combine these or put more info into this.
  • Historical
  • I like the format of this section, maybe include a little more reasoning behind the different theories.
  • Evidence
  • I think a picture here would help make it easier to understand what your trying to talk about.
  • Isotopes
  • I think you could make one topic showing evidence and have these last two as subtopics of that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.253.171.205 (talk) 05:16, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

Review of page by Michael Stevens

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Erin Fate of sundected material – alittle off topic, add a sentence or two indicating what is the direct fate, not indirect. You say its key, but not really what the fate is. Myriad – I don’t know what this term means, maybe give a definition First sentence from evidence of stable isotope, is worded weirdly, consider rephrasing. Large scale, you don’t emphasize that the end of the crustal recycling cycle, the formation of new crust. You only provide great evidence of that this recycling exists. Label the down going slabs on your image, Do the subducted slabs melt completely or partially? do the form a slab graveyard at the D”. What is the time scale on a rotation of this cycle, subduction to melting of slabs, to formation of the new crust? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mstev18 (talkcontribs) 15:11, 16 November 2011 (UTC)Reply


Review by Corey

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This page looks nice! I like your figure! The tone of the article is very Wiki, which is good. I think at the end, you might need a wrapping-up or concluding section. Something where you possibly explain current ongoing work? Or unsolved aspects of crustal recycling? Overall though this is as beautiful as an Andygator on a hot summer day.

Cshirc1 (talk) 13:30, 17 November 2011 (UTC)cshirc1Reply

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

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  This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Louisiana State University supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2011 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:46, 2 January 2023 (UTC)Reply