Talk:Courage C60/GA1

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Lukeno94 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 21:44, 28 May 2015 (UTC)Reply


I'll give this a review; it's been waiting long enough. Wizardman 21:44, 28 May 2015 (UTC)Reply

@Wizardman: - any progress on this? :) Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 13:23, 5 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Here's the issues I found:

  • "The Courage C60 was a Le Mans Prototype" I'd put (LMP) next to it just so that when LMP is used later on lay readers get where the abbreviation is from.
  • "and it was in this format that the C60 had its most success" feels worded a little oddly at the end, not sure how I'd reword it though.
  • "similar to that found on open-wheel racing car at the front of the car," on an open-wheel
  • Double check comma usage in the second half of Design particularly, but throughout the article as well; there's quite a few extra commas that aren't needed.
  • "Boullion partnered Rédon to fourth place, and the fastest of the non-Audi entries." rm and
  • " previous one; by winning the 1000 km" should be comma instead of semicolon
  • Overall, the article feels on the repetitive side, since the second half is essentially just noting places in races. Not really a GA issue granted, and given the subject matter I'm not sure myself how to make it flow better without losing the encyclopedic nature. I would work on that before any attempt at FAC, though.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 23:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)Reply

Fixes look good, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 01:54, 8 June 2015 (UTC)Reply