Talk:County Route 35 (Warren County, New York)/GA1

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Again, remove the picture from infobox and place within route description
2. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
3. Change the sentence "There is an interchange with the Northway, being Interchange 23." to "The route interchanges with the Northway at Interchange 23."
4. Move the sentence about the Northeat bridge repalcement to after the sentence about when the route was established
5. Integrate the last sentence of the lead into the first sentence
6. Remove the word "entire"
7. "becomes woodland and forestry"? sounds awkward. Try "become heavily forested".
8. "local woods road"? What kind of road is that?
9. First sentence of history: add comma after "Department"
10. "as that is who maintains the Northway and the bridge"? referring to the state or federal government?
11. Add comma after "Inventory"
12. Is the mileage known for the I-87 junction?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 18:04, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Done.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 18:19, 28 January 2009 (UTC)