Talk:Cool (Gwen Stefani song)/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Tbhotch in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Nice to see someone getting the FT back!
Writing and composition
editPretty comprehensive here, just a couple of comments:
As you mention No Doubt it may be worth including the fact that Stefani was part of the bandDoes the caption of the sound file need to be so long? I don't think you need to write the lyrics here, as people can listen to it themselves, and it is probably not fair use to include them along with the audio sample.- Oh, and could the recording details be mentioned here, so that they do not need sourcing in the infobox? Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Critical reception
editLink new wave
- This is not overlink New Wave? Already linked in the section above. TbhotchTalk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Chart performance
edit"...and within next eight weeks..." → ...and within the next eight weeks...- "It stayed on the chart eighteen weeks..." → It stayed on the chart for eighteen weeks...
- "On other Billboard charts, the single topped the Hot Dance Club Play, as well as reached the numbers four and nine on the Adult Top 40 and Pop 100, respectively" → rewrite
- "...dropping the chart on..." → ...dropping off/from the chart on...
- '"Cool" became the second highest debut of the week ending September 5, 2005, at eleven' → number eleven
- "...staying there only one week" → ..staying there for only one week
- "...the single debuted at number eighteen soaring to number sixteen the following week..." → comma after 'eighteen'
"Moreover, in Austria..." I don't think that 'moreover' is a good choice of word here
- All done. TbhotchTalk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Music video and promotion
editPlace ref 32 at end of sentence, it looks odd before a dash.
- Done
Maybe place inverted commas around 'cool' when you are describing Stefani's feelings in the video?
- It was suggested at PR to not to do it, because it may confuse readers with the song and the word cool. TbhotchTalk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Track listings
edit{{Col-2}} the different listings
Personnel
editAgain, {{Col-2}} can be used here. I'm not sure about bulleting the source, I think indenting would be better.
Alphabetical order would be preferable
- Orderer by their last name (or maybe you intended by their name?) excepting for Gwen who I think she is the important person here. TbhotchTalk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
References
edit- As online sources not, but since the workers go italics, they should go in that way. Personally I won't edit war with bots and automated tools which do their job. TbhotchTalk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Add Alpha Media Group as publisher for Blender ref
- done
The Australian Recording Industry Association does not publish the Hung Medien pages
Same for New Zealand. If you want to link to individual charts you can use links like [1], otherwise use the Hung Medien page for the song (as you do in Australia)
Hung Medien is a secondary source. Thus, the chart publishers do not need crediting here
- There are still a couple of unneeded italics, but I won't worry about them as the rest of the article is of quite a high quality. Adabow (talk · contribs) 23:57, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
Other
edit- Images, NPOV, broadness all OK
- Has the edit war between you and SnapSnap been sorted out?
- I think it is resolved. It was about what you commented on the references, about links should or not be italised. TbhotchTalk C. 23:24, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
On hold now... Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:46, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
- Unfortunatly Harajuku Lovers Tour 2005 must be a GA for re-nominate those articles for a FT. Doing... TbhotchTalk C. 20:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC)