Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA2

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Rp0211 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  


Infobox

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Lead

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Background

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  • No issues

Composition

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Critical reception

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  • No issues

Singles

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  • An album cut from the album, "No More No Less", spent one frame on the Hot Christian Songs chart, debuting and peaking at number thirty..[31] Get rid of extra period at end of statement

Release

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Track listing

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  • No issues

Personnel

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  • No issues

Charts and certifications

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  • No issues

References

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  • If you mention a work or publisher in a reference and it is wiki-linked, do not wiki-link it for further references
  • Only italicize publications in the "work=" parameter
  • Proofread all of these to ensure errors are not made; for a guideline to follow, use WP:REFERENCE


After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few prose issues, and things mostly just need to be proofread in the references section for this article to pass. I will give you the general seven days to fix mistakes, address points I have made, and/or ask me any questions that you have. Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work you are doing! Rp0211 (talk2me) 01:46, 22 June 2012 (UTC)Reply